Unit 5 · Academic Discourse & Scholarly Voice · Review Lab
You bring the 10-minute research talk you prepared for homework to a live seminar table. You deliver it, defend it under real questions, review a stranger's paragraph as a hostile-but-fair referee, and leave with a written reviewer response that could go out under your name.
By the end of this Review Lab · You'll be able to:
Vocabulary you'll use again from Unit 5
Reactivate the Unit 5 toolkit (thesis-forward opening, reporting stance, hedging, disagreement discipline) before the seminar starts.
Output: You name the missing move in each line and fix it in one sentence.
Teacher reads three lines, each with one Unit 5 move missing or broken (a topic-tour opening, a flat 'states' instead of a stance verb, an unhedged overclaim). For each, you name what's missing and repair it in one sentence.
If you're in a group: Pairs swap lines; small group votes on the cleanest repair.
Deliver the prepared 10-minute talk from homework, opening thesis-forward and closing with a bracketed limit, live at the seminar table.
Output: A delivered talk (aim for 6–8 minutes live, tighter than the homework draft) plus your one-paragraph abstract handed to teacher.
You deliver your prepared talk. Teacher plays conference chair: no interruptions during delivery. You MUST open thesis-forward, include at least one positioned citation and one disciplinary hedge, and name one bracketed question before you finish. Hand teacher your abstract at the end.
Rehearse calibrated live defence under real pressure, immediately after the talk.
Output: Four answers, each 60 seconds, each receiving, sorting and either conceding-with-precision or disagreeing-with-shared-ground.
Teacher asks four questions about your talk: one clarifying, one sceptical, one hostile, one bad-faith. 60 seconds each. Every answer must receive the question fairly and either accept a point with precision or disagree while naming shared ground. Name the bad-faith question as such, calmly.
If you're in a group: In groups of 3, a silent observer rates each answer 1–3 on calibration and reports back.
Practise positioned, stance-marked reading by refereeing a short literature paragraph as if for a journal.
Output: A spoken referee report: two things you'd accept as strong, one strand you'd want added, one thing you'd lean on the writer to hedge.
Teacher hands you a 150–200-word literature paragraph (invented or drawn from your field). Read it for 3 minutes, marking reporting verbs and hedges. Then speak your referee report aloud: name the strand(s) the paragraph belongs to, one citation that's doing real work, one claim you'd ask the writer to hedge, and one gap you'd want named.
If you're in a group: In pairs, swap referee reports before reporting to teacher; note where you disagreed with your partner's read.
Compress the whole seminar into a single written document: a real reviewer response to your own talk.
Output: A 400-word reviewer response handed in, addressing the three concerns you sketched for homework.
Using the three plausible reviewer concerns you prepared for homework, write a 400-word reviewer response to your own talk. You MUST: (a) receive the concerns fairly in one opening sentence, (b) sort them explicitly (accept in full / accept in part / disagree), (c) accept at least one with precision (say exactly what you changed and where), (d) disagree with at least one on shared ground, (e) name at least one scope condition on your own claim, (f) use at least six Review Lab 5 vocabulary items naturally.
Turn the seminar into named, repeatable moves before you leave the table.
Output: A 4-line summary: strongest hedge · strongest disagreement · weakest citation move · one line for next time.
Together, name the strongest hedge you produced today, the strongest disagreement, the weakest citation moment, and one concrete change you'll make the next time you present real work.
If you're in a group: In groups, each member states one move they'd steal from someone else's talk.
Reflection
Homework
Before Unit 6 / Lesson 26: find a real reviewer report and author response (many journals publish these openly). Mark one move you'd steal and one you'd avoid. Bring to Lesson 26.