Unit 1 · Precision, Voice & the Mastered Self · Review Lab
You deliver the same five-minute talk twice — once to an intimate audience, once to a public one — and we analyse what shifted in your voice, lexis and register.
By the end of this Review Lab · You'll be able to:
Recycled vocabulary from Unit 1
Activate the Unit 1 framework before performing: connotation, indirectness, register dials, self-irony.
Output: You name the three register dials and one self-irony move out loud, using your own examples.
Teacher prompts you with two short sentences. For each, you call which dial is set where (formality / distance / technicality) and add ONE self-irony tag without changing the meaning.
Group extension: Pairs swap sentences; small groups pick the most surprising rewrite.
Deliver the prepared 5-minute talk in INTIMATE register: warm distance, low formality, lay technicality.
Output: Five-minute spoken talk delivered to teacher-as-friend. Teacher tracks vocab items used.
You deliver the talk you prepared for homework. Teacher plays a close friend over coffee. You MUST use at least FIVE Unit 1 vocabulary items naturally. Teacher does not interrupt; ticks each item as it lands.
Convert performance into noticing before the second run.
Output: You name three concrete features of your own intimate voice.
Teacher reads back two of your own sentences verbatim. You name: (a) where the three dials sat, (b) one self-irony move you made, (c) one moment that risked ringing false.
Deliver the SAME talk in PUBLIC register: cooler distance, higher formality, still you — not corporate.
Output: Five-minute spoken talk delivered to teacher-as-public-audience. Teacher tracks register shifts.
Same content, same order. Teacher plays a public audience at a small evening event. You MUST keep the SAME core argument, but shift register so the talk would survive being recorded and posted. You MUST keep at least TWO self-irony moves — losing them all would over-formalise.
Compare the two runs forensically; convert intuition into named choices.
Output: A short annotated comparison: three lines you changed, two you kept, one you wish you had changed.
Teacher plays back specific moments (from notes, not recording). Together you build a 3-column comparison: line (v1) / line (v2) / what dial moved and why. Teacher challenges at least two of your calls — you defend or revise.
Group extension: In pairs, swap comparisons and pick the most controlled shift you'd steal.
Lock the lesson by producing a third register on the page.
Output: A 120-word written 'voice note' handed in.
Write a 120-word PUBLIC-FACING summary of your own talk (third register: formal, warm, lay). Must use at least FIVE Unit 1 vocab items naturally, include one calibrated self-irony move, and ring true.
Reflection
Homework
Before Unit 2 / Lesson 6: find a short public statement (news clip, op-ed opener, podcast intro) you admire. Mark THREE choices you'd steal — one connotation, one register dial setting, one self-irony move. Bring to Lesson 6.